Everyone Else is a Returnee – Chapter 222: I’m Coming To Get You Now – 6

[It’s the Holy maiden, the holy maiden is here!]
“Charge! Break everything that blocks our way!”

Shouts instantly filled the quiet holy region. The paladins resisted with their shields and spears, but they were having a hard time defending even in this place where their holy power was amplified.

Na YuNa looked at the invaders, as well as the paladins that were doing their best to protect the holy region, the holy maiden, as well as the pope. She couldn’t bear to lift her foot off the ground.

“……I can’t leave.”
“You cannot throw away your limitless potential here. Run away with HaJin. He will protect you well.”
“I can’t do that. I’m the holy maiden. As long as the people try to protect me, I must never be the first to abandon them!”

Perhaps the pope gave him a signal? Kang HaJin left the ranks of paladins and approached her.

“The church will only be able to survive if you live on. Her Holiness is saying that. And we all want that to happen.”

Na YuNa’s voice shook. However, her words could not continue. A giant monster that flew from afar had clashed with the ranks of paladins.

[t’s blood! Hihih, it’s the blood of the strong!]
“Kill and trample them all! Break that contemptible symbol of the goddess!”
“The beautiful holy maiden is in front of us! I shall allow a night with the maiden to the one that proves his bravery!”

The army that became stronger than when they fought before, pushed themselves into the holy region. There were three that were easily over level 250!
The paladins tried their best to fight back, but it was impossible. Even with Na YuNa’s blessing, there was a massive gap between them and the paladins.

“YuNa, go before it’s too late!”

Shouted the pope while making her holy powers go wild. Moreover, Kang HaJin ran at her as if he would use force if it came down to it. However, if she left here, the ranks of paladins would crumble instantly. She couldn’t retreat while knowing that.

“No, I don’t want to……! I’ll live my own!”
“Don’t you want to see Mr. Yu IlHan!? You need to survive in order to meet him or do anything!”

At that time Kang HaJin’s voice finally made Na YuNa burst her tear glands. He had basically slapped her face when she wanted to cry.

“I do. I want to see him…….! Isn’t that obvious!”

She was holding onto the communication device as she spoke. Even though she knew that nothing would be solved. She still pressed the button.

“Destroy everything! This is the reality of the religion that ruled over you all! It’s utterly, tragically weak and cowardly! The one that lead you all is but a scarecrow!”
“Eeeeek, protect the holy region! Exterminate that felon!”
“Then hurry, we have no time to waste!”

In the past 3 years, she wanted to see him a lot. However, with the communication device he had given her, she could neither see his face, nor hear his voice.

Would he be in any better situation than she is right now? 1 It was a world that made Yu IlHan as strong as he is. He would have a harder time than her if anything! Na YuNa didn’t want to worry him so she didn’t even turn the communication device on until now.

“I want to see him badly, but even so!”

Wouldn’t it be fine to call him for one last time?

Shouldn’t it be fine to tell him the fact that the woman called Na YuNa remembered and longed for him until her death? Wouldn’t Yu IlHan find this much selfishness cute?

“But even so, I!”
“Na YuNa!”

Yu IlHan would definitely do that. Even while acting like it was annoying, he would wordlessly harbor the memories of her in one corner of his heart.

Na YuNa decided to believe so. If not, wouldn’t be able to close her eyes in relief.
Believing that, Na YuNa took a step forward, and shouted as if to shake off all her hesitation.

“I’m the holy maiden of Leytna~!”

The moment her voice echoed in the region, the crown of pope glowed brightly as if it had found its owner after a long wait.

With the temple as the center, the entire holy region trembled as if to answer her.

[Resistance, uncomfortable power……!]

That combined with Na YuNa’s overwhelming holy power to amplify each other’s strength, and filled the region. And eventually, the entire holy region was filled with pink aura.

“How, you’re still 3rd class though…..!’
“Lady, Leytna……?”

Kang HaJin and the pope became speechless in that sight. The army that intruded into the holy region was no exception.

“Lady Leytna has……”
“Aah, just what was I doing until now?”

In front of the enormous amount of holy power that was nigh impossible for a single person to emit, everyone lost their will to fight.
Even the monsters retreated so what else was needed to say? The current Na YuNa, emitting an aura while resonating with the entire temple at the center of the holy region, was no different from a god.

[You have mastered the skill, High-class Holy power control. The skill may evolve if you satisfy the evolution criteria.]
[You have mastered the skill, High-class blessing. The skill may evolve if you satisfy the evolution criteria.]
[You have acquired the title, ‘Master of Miracles’. All holy-power-class skills get a 30% boost in effectiveness.]

With enough levels, she would have become 4th class already. The one with the talent to become the hope of Earth if you exclude Yu IlHan – her talent had already blossomed plenty already.


Na YuNa’s voice thundered across the holy region, carrying with it a throve of holy power that helped her allies recover while weakening her enemies.


The light intensified. The paladins felt as if their bodies had evolved by a tier. And on the other hand, the enemies were weakened. They did not miss this opportunity for revenge against those that tried to taint the holy region.

“Lady Leytna is watching over us!”
“The voice of the maiden is wrapping us warmly. What do we have to fear! We are protecting true beauty!”

That light definitely would not last forever. Even while knowing that, the paladins raised their morale and defeated the enemies. Right now, everyone was shining brightly. They would also shine brightly until the very moment they die.

“Aaah, aaaaah.”
“Na YuNa, you idiot……”

Yes, who could stop her stubbornness? They should’ve realized that things would turn out like this from the very beginning.

Kang HaJin turned around with a bitter smile. She was always like this; a princess that would only be satisfied when things went her way. A stubborn kid that had to do what she decided on even if she had to die.

That was why, Kang HaJin liked her alot. To speak the truth, he almost fell in love with her for real several times.

“Mr. Yu IlHan, what are you going to do about this?”

You’ll regret it if you let such a woman die.

Kang HaJin muttered those words that would not be heard by anyone as he turned around. Then, he called for the pope, who was crying while looking at Na YuNa that was resonating with the entire holy region after acquiring the crown of the pope.

“Your holiness.”
“……Yes. Since things came to this, we don’t have any choice. We’ll leave behind the church in our deaths.”
“I’m sorry that the holy maiden is so stubborn.”
“No, that is why I find her more lovely. Fufu, yes. We also need to burn magnificently for one last time!

When the pope stepped forward with her staff, Kang HaJin also raised his sword and shield to protect Na YuNa.

He would not let Na YuNa die at least before he did. Although he was always the dunce with everyone else, at least he has to show a cool side to the holy maiden before his death, like a paladin!

[Whoa, they are all so weak!]

However, it seemed like fate would not let him look cool after all.

[I’ll feel bad to bring out the mirrors…… Since it came to this… Go, master! I choose master!]
“You do it, duh. Do I really have to take my spear out against these weaklings?”
“Oh my, the arrogant IlHan is so cool too!”

Amidst the pink holy region, a giant castle appeared as if it was just born.
The castle cast an enormous shadow on the ground. It was enough to catch everyone’s attention, and when it did, something popped out.

[Tch, master has a lovey-dovey time with a woman while I clean up mobs……! I ! hate! you!]
“Is that a mirror……? But why would a mirror be in the sky?”

The imperial soldier that had the best eyesight realized that it was a big mirror, but did not realize the uses of it.

Even until the moment a portion of the army was wiped out, including himself, by the high-density energy, shot from it.

“……What was that?”
“Just what happened just now?”

This was a very unrealistic scene, so they could only have a hard time processing that information. A mirror? Shot a beam? And vaporized hundreds of people? Even 4th class mages couldn’t accomplish something like that!

[Ei, eih!]

However, the fact that whenever they heard a playful woman’s voice, the mirror changed its trajectory to shoot more beams, was also true. The beam only erased the people from the imperial army! The imperial army only came to themselves after losing tens of thousands of men.

“H, how can this be?”
“Retreat! Announce the retreat of the army!”

The battlefield instantly fell into chaos. The imperial army’s ranks all scattered as if their forcefulness in proceeding to Elforce until now was all a lie. They only ran with the single thought that they had to dodge those mirrors.

[I get works like these even in other worlds.]

However, that was not the end. That was because Mystic had retracted all the mirrors after seeing that a massacre was no longer possible.


The plants attractions and other tools that composed the garden of the Flying fortress seem to split apart into suitable sizes, before sharpening their edges while falling down to the ground. Although they looked like they were falling everywhere, each and every one of them was aiming for one imperial soldier. This was practically a large-scale sniping operation.

“Ju, just what is…..”
“It’s only attacking the imperial army. Is that the blessing of lady Leytna…..!?’
“Lady Leytna is protecting us!”

The Elforce army that fell into panic like the imperial army at the beginning, saw that the Flying fortress was pinpoint-killing only the imperial soldiers, and recovered their calm and morale. Moreover, there was still Na YuNa’s holy power as well! They would believe it if someone said that Leytna had descended in the form of a castle!

“This can’t happen!”
“Retreat the army first! We need to report to His Majesty first!”
“No, then, my merits will….. Eeek, we need to bring that castle down somehow!”
“Monsters! It’s your turns, move!”

When the unexpected situation had occurred, there were conflicts in the upper echelons of the army as well. Some said that they had to preserver the army, some were blinded by merits, and some thought of using the monsters they received from the Destruction Demon Army! Even while they were having their meeting, the number of the imperial army was decreasing at a frightening rate.

[Do not block the sun, do not block our path!]
[Energy, I can feel a lustrous energy from there!]

The monsters over level 250 all started moving. These had made the Elforce army shudder in fear just by existing! The paladins enhanced with holy powers tried to block them while clenching their teeth, but these monsters did not even try to face them.

[Get out……. get lost, from my vision!]

The monsters leaped up high. The flying fortress’s altitude was not that high right now. They say the ignorant were brave – they did not doubt for a second that they could make the flying fortress fall with their powers.

[Critical Hit!]

However, their bodies simultaneously burst into bits the next moment. Without any signs, they were covered by a brilliant white flame!

“Whew, that much is easy now.”
“I don’t really mind, but isn’t it a little off to swing THAT like you would a toy hammer?”

In the place where the monsters exploded to death, a man was standing. Na YuNa, who was watching the Flying fortress from the moment it appeared, could immediately catch onto his figure.

The man had a tall height, had metallic wings on his back, and was holding a huge hammer that even one thousand burly men wouldn’t be able to lift, with his one hand. The white flame burning at the tip of the hammer was proof that it was him that killed the monsters just now.

[Master, why did you cancel your concealment?]
“The rest of these guys are one-hit-kills even without it.”
[How haughty.]

Na YuNa confirmed the man’s face, as well as his voice. Following that, she checked that she wasn’t under any visual or auditory status ailment, and shouted in the biggest voice she could.


The man that leapt through dimensions to look for her. The moment he heard that, Yu IlHan turned his head around to meet her eyes. His neither loud nor small voice could be heard in Na YuNa’s ears.

“I’m here. Miss YuNa.”

Na YuNa’s heart thumped. Why was it? He looked like he had become much more handsome when she wasn’t there. There were a lot of things she wanted to say if she got to meet him again, but she had forgotten about all of them the moment she saw his face.
Originally, she shouldn’t be such a character, she should have reacted calmly as if she knew he’d come to find her….. but she couldn’t even flinch as if she was stunned.

“And since you’ve already waited for a long time, wait a little more, alright?”

Yu IlHan gave a cool reply to Na YuNa who froze stiff on the spot, and lifted up his hammer. The hammer of disaster that was over 100m in diameter. Both the imperial army and the Elfroce army couldn’t move due to the sheer pressure from the hammer.

“Let’s talk after I clean these guys up.”

A white flame more magnificent than before once again burned on the tip of the hammer.
Disaster descended upon the land.

Author’s notes

  1. (Warning) There’s a love-struck girl lense on her eyes.
  2. Loner accompanied by disaster.

Translator’s notes

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  1. Yes actually.

About Koukouseidesu

Currently a senior high school student. From the island republic of Singapore. God damn it exams are hard

83 Replies to “Everyone Else is a Returnee – Chapter 222: I’m Coming To Get You Now – 6”

    1. Tabeleta

      After 3 days of intense “action”, there’s no way that he wouldn’t become cool XD

      He probably even got the Lady Killer skill to level 50 and can says those embarrassing lines as easily as breathing

  1. Sdf

    Sir Translator, I have a serious request. Please change the skill name ‘Falling Down’ to ‘Downfall’. The skill appears in 214 as Ilhan’s new skill.

    Reason: Falling Down is incredibly awkward. It is more associated with comedy than a character’s strongest move. If I heard just the name, I’d think whoever activates it will slip and fall down; a joke/prank skill.

    Please, please don’t disregard this. I am really sincere in saying this name doesn’t fit! Please don’t make Ilhan’s best skill sound like a gag skill.

    1. James

      I would say it sounds like a great skill name. “Downfall” doesn’t roll off the tongue as much as you think.

      If you were a character and you said your skill name, “Downfall” doesn’t have much of an impact, where as “Falling Down” does.

    2. Jonathan Hurd

      I’m with SDF on this one. Down Fall feels like it has a bit more epicness to Falling Down. Falling Down just kind of always reminds me of tripping. Down Fall seems more chuni which I kind of like with this author.

      1. Reason

        As a native English speaker, I gotta say Falling Down makes no sense. The grammar and general flow is awkward. I also think it sounds like a joke ability. Even Fall Down would be slightly better, though it still sounds comedic, like he’s cursing his enemies to trip. Downfall probably is the best choice here.

    3. Sdf

      Wow, I didn’t expect so many people would disagree. Since we aren’t coming to a consensus, let’s just shelve this argument and let the translator and proofreader decide.

      1. Tom

        When I hear Falling Down I think of the song London Bridge is Falling Down which gives me a vision of destruction which I think suits him unlike downfall where all I think of is rain.

          1. Carmeops

            Leylin cheat, he got a high tech computer glued to his very soul, which he can use to control everything in his body and even his brain, no need to read books, just have to look at each page and the computer read everything and upload the relevant info directly in your brain cells

          2. Sdf

            Come to think of it, can Ilhan do that now? With Record. Everything he sees/experiences becomes a record within him, right?
            Though he definitely won’t have the AI Chip’s processing function.

          3. Void

            Not sure what that Magus-warlock-world story has to do with this, but let me rant for a bit here.
            It’s truly the type of cop-out MC, when he acts smug about his personal capabilities which all stem from a chip in his head. It’s absurd to the point it can teach him martial arts, and he’d raise his nose to the sky and laugh at others for not being able to learn as fast or not trying hard enough.
            Seriously, fuck that guy.

          4. Sdf

            Allow me to answer your question: Absolutely nothing. I posted random thoughts in my brain.

          5. Sdf

            Ah, and about Leylin being smug, I really don’t think he is. Rather, instead of boasting, he focuses on hiding his ability. What he is pulling off in the latest translated chapters is seriously impressive.

          6. Ajay

            If you want leylin epicness plz read from chap 756 onwards which is currently being translated, I’m sure you will love it!!!!!!

          7. Sdf

            Noooooo way. You gotta read the entire arc from the beginning. Anything less is disrespecting that epic plot.

        1. Jonathan Hurd

          I honestly can’t think of London Bridge is falling down without hearing the tune in my head. Really takes away from something as epic as Ilhan’s ultimate flame ability, imo.

    4. Void

      I disagree with both, but at least “Downfall” has the connotation of impending doom.
      I already said my piece, but I really think it should’ve just been “Domain”. Because that’s literally what it bloody god damn is.

      “Falling Down” is just silly.

      1. Jukem

        Void is on the level with this one. The ability insinuates the dooming of higher existences into a world of fire, curses, and all types of hell. Reminds me of the six realms of rebirth, or paths of hell. Something boss like purgatory would suit better in my opinion. It represents a domain with the wrath of a hell bringer.

      1. retsam

        The thing is, ‘Falling Down’ is in present progressive tense. If you had a skill that could instantly kill someone, would you name it ‘Dying Now’? NO!! Even if you had to choose such an awkward name structure, it would be ‘Die Now’. Though would be better to just use a noun, and go with ‘Immediate Death’ or something like that.

        Downfall probably isn’t the best choice, but it’s infinitely better than Falling Down. And as Void said, it does have the connotation of doom. In impact, it is far above.

    5. Sdf

      Now that I think about this more carefully, ‘Falling Down’ probably implies ‘Falling to Hell’ in the Korean original. Trying to translate this really is a pain. Would just ‘Fall’ work? ‘Fall’ already has the implied down direction. One-word skill names have their own charm.

    6. armanak

      in my opinion falling down is good enough after all every time i read the skill falling down it reminds me of the song in Sora no Otoshimono in my opinion is quite an epic song

  2. Lee

    6/27/2017 UTC+08:00
    I read 9 chapters today… from 214-222…
    By far… this chapter is amazing.

    I tried to click to the next chapter but 223 isn’t out yet… I cried.

    Thank you for your hard work! Get some rest! ^_^

    1. James

      Very, I would view her as a show model. Just is there for show.

      No wonder the Major Factions want “Show Models”. Need bait for the powerhouses.

    2. lazygeko

      I don’t find her boring, but I don’t like her at all. I am sad that she is so popular and that the MC has to go get her first. But, it is the author’s choice so lets see where he takes us.

      As always, thanks for the chapter

    3. Jonathan Hurd

      I don’t know I find she has some surprising depth to her. When I first read about her it started out as she is superficial and stupid. Then I thought they were going to do a ‘no wait that’s all an act she puts on to trick people.’ The truth turned out to be a mixture. She has more going on than what first meets the eye but that bubbly side is also a part of her.

      Its an interesting mix all in all. She had grown up all her life being aware of just how dark humans could be with their desires. This lead to her having to be extremely careful and wary of people betraying her. I feel like she made a mask for herself to hide with but also mixed a part of her own personality into it. I find the layers of her character personally pretty fascinating. She mixed the expectations people have of someone who looks like her and her own personality to make a unique mix to deal with the outside world while staying true to herself.

        1. Carmeops

          her whole character is resumed in two words: “too pretty”

          she is too pretty, so bad people lust for her and cause horrible things to get her, that’s all
          all her past traumas, all the ways she force herself to act, how terrifyingly clingy she act toward the only person not interested in her yet who has the strength to protect her, all is contained in those two simple words: too pretty

          there is nothing complex here, she is as flat and boring as that

          now take Liera, who was an angel who discarded her emotions to join Heaven, then spent a thousand year looking over the MC, witnessing his endless struggle to keep improving himself, struggling between her orders to keep him safe, her budding feelings, and the rules that bound her, ending up accepting a “pagan” blessing, going against the Heaven rules, yet doing so to help Heaven, and finally devoured by her love, casting aside her very life for the one she learned to love more than anything

          THAT is a complex character

          1. Jonathan Hurd

            I don’t know, I think just dismissing Na Yuna as ‘Too pretty’ is not really doing the character justice. Honestly a ‘too pretty’ character in my book would just act like some stuck up ojou sama who never takes no as an answer and bosses everyone around.

            Na Yuna from the start showed that she had a pretty decent self awareness and a certain level of restraint. She was free spirited but never really rude or overbearing. Sure she used her Beauty and was proud of it, but she didn’t really drown in it or look down on people because of it.

            It would of been so easy to just make her a stupid narcissist who couldn’t understand why everyone didn’t follow her beck and call. From there you have her start off being angry that the MC doesn’t recognize her beauty though she eventually warms up to him and you basically have a by the book Tsundere character you can find in just about any mass produced manga/anime.

            Yes, she starts off clingy and probably first got interested in Yu Ilhan because he so steadily rejected her and didn’t have any ulterior motives, but the feelings developed from there as time went on in a pretty natural way. She learned that she could trust him and enjoyed the time they spent together. She liked how he treated her normally and was upfront with her. Add in the fact that he worried about her and went out of his way to try and help her and it seems pretty natural why she would fall in love with Yu Ilhan.

            The process Liera and Na Yuna fell in love with Ilhan is pretty similar in my book. Both started not really taking him too serious and viewed him more as an anomaly. After witnessing his effort and dedication though they eventually started developing feeling that grew more serious as time went on. Both girls started in places of superiority but eventually found themselves drawn to him and also realized how amazing he was and the efforts he had put forth are.

    4. Void

      I don’t think Yuna is “boring”, I just don’t get why she even finds Ilhan attractive at this point.

      Almost all romantic subplots within this story seem completely random at this point. Even Liera is the same. Just because they spent 1,000 years together, she broke a pact she made which defines her existence, which went on for who knows how ten thousands of years? Horse shit.
      But right now, I think it’s safe to say it’s best to just ride it out. The story ends in like 50 chapters or so anyway, no?

  3. Matthew Link

    IlHan may need to use the hammer on YuNa when he is finished with the monsters. The love she has for him will probably increase 10 fold due to his coming across worlds to save her.

  4. James

    A giant castle appeared out the sky. That never gets old.
    A man with a 100 meter hammer kills men and monster. That’s cool!

    Thanks for the chapter, it’s fun.

    1. Jonathan Hurd

      Funny part is this is just the start, lol. God if they dropped that Imperial Army onto Earth I don’tt think they’d last an hour much less a day, lol. Ilhan on the other hand cleared Earth. These guys are just laughable to him at this point.

    1. Jonathan Hurd

      Meh he joined forces with the Destruction Demon Army. Even if Ilhan didn’t show up his ending wasn’t going to be pleasant. I betcha after they got YuNa they would of turned the monsters on his entire empire to feed on and level up with.

  5. Shiro

    Sigh …. i knew the author was lying back then saying it wasn’t a harem.
    I could smell the harem on the spaces between words !
    Well, just hope it doesn’t become annoying.

  6. Pan

    “Go, master! I choose master!”
    Mystic Channel her inner Pokémon trainer LMAO

    Even with all this character development for YuNa, I still dislike her. I rather have the funny and lovely Ertawagon and tsundere MiRae 😕

  7. Rogue King

    It seems graduating from his V-class has made IlHan can say something cool in front of girl without writhing in agony, huh?

    TY for the chapter~

    1. Void

      He doesn’t matter to the story, so…I can’t say I have any feelings towards him. He doesn’t appear enough to actually warrant anything.
      Unless that is the very thing that makes you sympathetic, that is.

  8. Candied Skull

    “Would he be in any better situation than she is right now? It was a world that made Yu IlHan as strong as he is. He would have a harder time than her if anything!”
    Earth could probably be considered significantly tougher, but IlHan is just that OP that it was most frequently a cakewalk.
    Mighty, mighty IlHan to the rescue!

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